Anna Graham

I like it! Your characters are believable, your dialogue is creative, and you keep the reader interested! Good work! I'm excited to read the rest of it! Just fyi: There's ...

Wow, this was great! You're talking about WW2, right? Your imagery is very effective. I especially like, "I pulled apart the seams and washed the spaces in between, looking for ...

Hello there! I love new ideas, so let's see how yours turns out, eh? (just experimenting with structure here, so please look at it objectively :D ) Cut me with ...

Very interesting! Two things: Remember to put your commas inside your quotation marks. And, it's kinda strange to me for a boy and a girl to be living with each ...

Hello there! I'm sorry to say I've never read anything of this nature, but I'll try to help with the other things! “Sasuke, we got to get back to your ...

Ok, first of all, I gotta say, this is great! You have a unique writing style, and it alone keeps me interested. "The sand in my face felt like gravel ...

Lol! I love it! This story definitely has potential! You convinced me they were real people and I got so sucked in, i forgot to look for things to correct! ...

Lol! I love the tone! It's light, sarcastic, and amusing! I love how you compare that poor boy to different animals. The only advice I have for you is to ...

Intriguing! I like how it tells a story. It's creative and you've got some great wording so far. I liked the bits about dragons and goblins that are your reasons ...

I like it! It's definitely a more common subject, but I think you did well with it. The rhyming didn't sound forced, and you had a lot of creative wording. ...

I like it! You've got some great imagery here, like "Standing under the crooked tree With its crippled limbs and misshapen leaves," my favorite is the first stanza: "I know ...

Wow. Honestly, this poem took my breath away. Give me a sec to catch it and I'll see if I can tell you why. The imagery: gorgeous. I felt everything ...

Well, it sounds to me like the imagination, but that's just me. "It is a nothing (it has no mass) but extends further than the universe. Only there may a ...

Wow, this is a great piece! I couldn't write something like this if my life depended on it. You have a great rhythm going, and the rhyming doesn't sound forced. ...

This is a great idea! I think you pulled it off well! There's one main thing that could make it better though, which Eimear already mentioned a bit. You tell ...